http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d140/jhbmw007/grahamgroup.swf

it needs to be sped up

Damn thats cool Dale,.. but yea.. I agree that it needs to be sped up a bit.

Dale, that is pretty cool man.
I would agree, the speed should be just a hair faster.

Good design though. Did you guys/gals do that or did you hire a graphics company?

A graphic artists is redoing my whole site. It will be sped up about 1.5 X the speed.

oh..I didn't realize you were paying someone to do that. I thought you did it yourself.

In that case, here's a bit more in depth critique...

It's a bit cartoonish for professional work. Especially when the magnifying glass is cut off by the edges of the swf.

It would also help if the speed varied throughout. For example, it's far more important to see your name and logo than the other stuff that really doesn't matter. The speed should be slow here but sped up otherwise.

When the glass goes over your logo, it barely fits in the viewing area. I would think that you would really want to stress this part of the swf.

Also, get them to get you a higher res image of the money (you can find several on any stock photo site). This will help make it look less amateurish. It is so grainy now.

I really thought you did this yourself. It looks fine for a beginners flash intro but not if you're paying someone to do it. Get what you pay for.

You should have asked Chris and me. Our flash work I dare say, is far better.

Best part is I am paying about $200 for the whole website. Remember, I am a cheap bastard....

$200?
wow
ok...nm

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